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Fulfillment



strong loving arms,
filled with understanding,
rainy days brought about by me
are swept under the rug,
without another mention,
those few days can be so tough

a father's gaze that cannot be triumphed
is another inhale,
that look of acceptance
sends me to the edge

together we make it through this stage,
it's hard, but is the most valuable part

my handsome man, so strong, but gentle,
I give myself to you,
whole-hearted,
as you make all of my dreams come true


fulfillment

in every corner

 

 

   you

     inspire

       me

 

 

 

Author notes

Write a poem listing all the things
you are looking for in a perfect life partner.

Place them here for all of AP to see.

In just what order do you look
for that perfect one to fulfill your life.


Please no more than 30 lines.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    I am glad you took the time to list all the things you are looking for in a partner.
    To me the perfect partner would be one that is caring and understanding.

    Riftkin


  • everyone1 gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    Precious and beautifully penned ...

    I loved it ...

    ~ James ~