I see the moon and think about your eyes
The shine that tells me all you say is true
I think about your words and passion flies
The only thing I think about is you
I see the sky and think about your skin
And dream of kissing you from top to toe
The next time that we meet I shall begin
By kissing every inch I see on show
What are the things that make you think of me
Do you dissolve when someone says my name
I wonder if my feelings set you free
I hope the way I feel sets you aflame
I see you in the beauty of the world
I want to be wherever you are curled
Author notes
Shakespearean sonnet (abab cdcd efef gg rhyme in iambic pentameter)
A contest entry
- English Sonnets Please (romantic) by poets whisper.
900 points, ended November 28, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me honestly what you think, good or bad.
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Very beautiful sonnet.
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A beautiful poem.I can be at peace this Sunday morning.Knowing you are happy because you are writing about the moon.Have a lovely day , Ros
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I do love the moon
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Hope she enjoys this piece this was beautiful.
Love
Passions
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reminds me of bella and edward...
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All I need now is to know who bella and edward are ...
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Wonderful!
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HEAVENLY..............
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