The perfect partner for me
Doesn't have to be perfect at all
He just has to be caring and kind
And at least 5 ft. 7 in. tall
Oh I almost forgot to say
He has to be at least 74
With luscious lips you see
I really like to kiss and kiss some more
Just a little bit of hair is nice
So I can twirl it around my finger
While kissing his cheeks and neck
Smelling his cologne that lingers
If he knows how to hug real tight
Cuddle and snuggle and coo
Then he's the one I'm looking for
To him I will say I do
A contest entry
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900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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I am glad you took the time to list all the things you are looking for in a partner.
To me the perfect partner would be one that is caring and understanding.
Riftkin
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hahaha great k. sorry i am too young then for your kiss...good luck
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Isn't it great to be too young? But I wouldn't hold that against you. Instead I'd hold my lips against yours and kiss and kiss and kiss. You see Pete, lips don't know age.
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very nice verse fitting to define a gentleman perfect in the romantic sense.
"Oh I almost forgot to say
He has to be at least 74
With lucious lips you see
I really like to kiss and kiss some more"
What does desire more except the lovable nature of his/her better half
All the best in this contest
katie -
a beautiful wish from a beatiful friend.....It would sure be nice to find that perfect partner....excellent write ...Novy
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Thanks novy. Glad you liked the poem. I haven't given up yet, how about you?
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This is really cute and such a simple one.
I hope that you find who you are looking
for if you haven't already in life. Take care
my friend and good luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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Thanks Jeremy, glad you liked this poem. There is someone out there I just haven't found him. Maybe I too fussy or too old.
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