I need a brave heart beating strong,
can calm me when i may be alarmed.
I wish a man with fear,
for no ones near perfect.
If need be a man of praise,
to go to church and pray all day.
But most of all a man of love,
So frail as if a dove...
Author notes
not all love is perfect but some are darn close
A contest entry
- Check inside to see by Riftkin.
900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I am glad you took the time to list all the things you are looking for in a partner.
To me the perfect partner would be one that is caring and understanding.
Riftkin

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thank you for the honrable mention!
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Generous ...
Truly unconditional,
devout.
God bless you ...
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Thank you
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Good write
So true are your words and we all see love in different ways but if it brings love to another then its the right way

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Thank you
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