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In My Dreams

 

 

I close my eyes each night

find myself lost in Heaven

 

where angels dwell

songs are sung

 

miracles take shape

tranquility and love are abundant

 

my heart feels so alive

all of my goals are reachable

 

it's like the first time

every time I close my eyes

 

I am whole

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: But, I never felt so awake.

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  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 4, 2008

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    This is beautiful hon and the background goes so well with this one! Good luck to you in the contest hon


  • Alyzeh
    December 4, 2008

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    This was lovely!!
    I loved the flow all around. Good luck in the contest, brilliant write.

    Love
    Alyzeh


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 22, 2008

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    my heart feels so alive

    all of my goals are reachable


    how does that feel, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.