Thoughts running through my mind,
oh how far i am behind,
three days now without sleep,
i must keep up,write more.
Faster, faster must i work,
no time to sleep.
Busy bees, work with me,
never have i felt so alive, so awake,
such a thrill to still be,
awake.
Author notes
i think thats 50 words, or 51? not sure xP
A contest entry
- lack of sleep by written-in-ink.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 24 entries
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ohh jeez
i feel like this exactly
you have no idea.
thank you and good luck -
Yes there are certainly times when we just can't relax and feel the urge to keep going on different fronts. I like the images you penned her that got my own mind racing.
All the best with this
gaylene
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Thank you
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