I walk in step with you my Lord,
my umbrella is your light.
No need to look where I walk,
for you have perfect sight.
I do not tremble from the storm,
as you are by my side.
I do not look behind myself,
for moment will divide.
I do not ask for wants or needs,
I need not call to you;
for trust and faith need no plea,
when thoughts are pure and true.
Simplicity of being,
undivided can not fall;
standing firm in your presence,
I have no need to call.
A contest entry
- please spare little time... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 6, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I can see your heart with its humbleness through the soulful poetry and the words around..well done...
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I think that this is a lovely piece that you have penned good luck to you in this contest best wishes always be well.
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BEAUTIFULLY INSPIRING!!!
When one has faith and trust one can forge ahead and never fear.
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Beautifully Written!
Wonderful write, and your sprituality shines through every line.
Just beautiful! Blessings, Patty
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Great write
"Simplicity of being,
undivided can not fall" - I like these lines especially; and also the first stanza
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A testament to your faith!
Nicely done; "no need to look where I walk & for trust and faith need no plea"
Your confidence is solid my friend.
The best to you.
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OUTSTANDING
Plain to see your faith is strong my sweet sis..another great, positive, and uplifting write.
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