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Love Shouldn't Hurt

Once upon a time
There was a little girl
But little did she know
The horrors of this world

Little did she know
That love shouldn't hurt
That love didn't mean being hit
Or pushed into the dirt

No one ever told her
That love wasn't being abused
That love didn't mean being his toy
Or being used

LIttle did she know
That it would end this way
Love shouldn't hurt
But she was killed that day

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  • wow your such an amazing writer! you poems are so full of emotions and i can relate to some quite alot....i dont even know what to say....theres no words to explain how good this is.
    keep up the good work


  • daffodilblossom
    December 6, 2008
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    good one

    really good lines


  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    November 22, 2008
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    love is pain. one of my mottos i've held true to. i know that feels. well done piece here...