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Love so Deep (heartches & moving on)

Every one of us desire a love so deep

and so unbreakable that our spirits long for it

and our hearts crave it like no other

But, like many of you out there, I am scared of getting hurt.


I have found love breakable and made my heart despise it

I become scared and draw back, but that love is still there.

Healing takes time, and to help myself heal, and  feel love once more,

I kept believing in love, and  there is life after a broken heart



But when i find myself falling once more,

I kept understanding the deepest depths of my heart

And sometimes, there are those out there we never forget

and will always love, even distances apart

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 6, 2008

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    this is such a touching poem as though your very heart has written it...thank you so much for sharing it with me and for entering