the low whispers,
always find a way to haunt me.
slowing incasing themsevles in my head,
i hear my name being whispered,
i look around,
but no one does anything.
why didn't anyone else hear that?
it was so loud and clear...
why don't you say it my face?
are you afraid my words will beat yours?
i dare you to say it to my face.
i'll only make you seem dumb,
your plans to make me sad,
will fail.
i don't care what you say anymore,
go ahead and say it,
it's all rubbish anyway...
i'm so tired of it,
i'm so tired of blaming myself,
i'm just sick of it.
so go ahead and try,
because i want to go out in flames...
Author notes
Ranty/about poem time: -^.^- this poem was sloppy because i didn't give it a lot of thought, but i'm back! :] oh yeah and I didn't spell check sooo -.-'..... Anyhoo, i always hear people whispering my name and i'll look around but no one says anything, i turn back and ask my friend if she heard that, they always so no (no i don't hear things >.>). Which makes me mad 'cause, they said it loud and clear, but then again I have amazing hearing! ;D yay mee (makes me feel like a vampire, RAWR!). I would think i'd be deaf by now, i mean i stick my ipod in my ears and crunk it all the way, plus any other music :]... o.o thanks for reading!! 
Tied off quick, look around, plunge it in, pull it out...
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wow.. this is a little strange I admit
however the imagery was amazing
and lol
I obviously can't spell XD
love this though ^-^
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xD ty.. again-ness. o.o
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lol this is very good
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Great poem, creepy shivery, but true. The voices are nothing hun, echoes of your mind's distress, I know. Talk to someone about it. There's help coz who needs this crapola?
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Thanks for the comment. :] and the voices are people whispering, not in my head. o.o Thanks again!
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I Like it
I don't know what has been said about this poem before, but I really like it. It's like a dare to this ethereal voice that speak to only you. Soooo cool. Daring a ghost to come out of hiding. Scary scary thought.
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Thank you vurh much! :]
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I would definitely go back in & spell check and capitalize "I"and the beginning of new sentences if for no other reason than to show that you put time and effort into the piece. There is strong intent here & the lack of capitalization, in particular, detract from that intent.
In any case, this is a nice piece of work! Good job -
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Thanks x.x
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