collect circles
and poke them at the corners
[yeast buds
and bubbles in bread]
random thought
squirms.
a worm
in the sketch of leaves.
chains
(un)coiled
swinging free
letters
in letters
in scraps
in strokes
writer's block:
dominoes
pushed
Author notes
Prompt: Scribbles
A contest entry
- Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended November 22, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critiques welcome!
Comments
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An excellent piece indeed! You have taken the prompt and used it in so many different ways in so few words. Wonderfully penned indeed.Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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thanks loads for your comment! i appreciate it! and i'm glad you enjoyed it.
bless ya!
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I can totally picture what's happening here...and in a twisted way, I can relate to the similarities on a page when trying to override writer's block...and simply can't! Great job & good luck in the contest
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i'm glad you can see what's happening here. it's the randomness of thought i've tried to depict. thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it!
bless ya!
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