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Instinct

Woken up in the middle of the night
With this weird dream
In that dream youre with another womans arms
I cried and cried till my tears gone dry
And sob in silence for hours
I felt like a storm is coming to rock the boat of life
So wild like any minute it will flip over
why this weird dreams coming along
Is it a warning sign?
Or Im just being paranoid of losing you
I want the full words coming from you
This isnt a guessing game
Since this dreams started
I became insecure and to sensitive
That every unanswered message or a call
I automatically think your with someones arms
But you always say your just busy
And I believed from the start
But as days passingby
And I felt Im losing you already
I cant think of any reason why your doing this to me
And I felt so betrayed
left me behind with a wounded heart

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  • Baisi
    November 23, 2008
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    This is full of pain. But it's oh so beautiful.