Stick-fingers reach upwards towards
Heaven’s unattainable
Heights in hidden ritual
Philosophising on what lies beneath
Their tangled Earth bound roots
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very tai chi my friend...
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I love the connection of your thoughts here and that philosophical view you have taken. So very soft. Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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beautiful way of describing the many trees dotting our earth. and the way you've connected heaven and earth. absolutely stunning!
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I love the way you've tied heaven to earth through the tree without ever mentioning the actual conduit. Very well done!
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