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Grandma's Celebration...***

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Grandma seems so cheerful today
She started cooking the bird
Up way before the dawn’s first ray
She rattled the pots, I heard

There always a big breakfast first
But never lunch that day
I heard a mumbled word she cursed
That not her normal way

Eggs, slab bacon , her fresh baked bread
Sure holds you till the meal
Gram sure knows how to lay a spread
I followed on her heals

She started drinking orange juice
Must be her favorite drink
She seemed today a wee bit loose
Threw Grandpa a great big wink

The dinner caused a few beached whales
As grandkids cleared the mess
The grownups told the family tales
Some spoken with huge success

It seemed Grandma was in her zone
The loudest of the group
That’s when I found her peach schnapps thrown
Behind the back door stoop

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Grandma’s Celebration…
Wandika 11-22-2008

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  • Amera gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    The imagery in this poem is fantastic! Now I'm hungry! The wonderful meter and rhyme gives this poem a real holiday feeling. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • Wandika gold member
      November 25, 2008
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      Thanks Amera

      Appreciate your stopping by.
      Have another wonderful Thanksgiving.

      Jim


  • Janice M Pickett
    November 22, 2008

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    Love it, heheheheheh This was so typical of the older generation in our more sedate days. When grandparents and parents never di anything out of place as far as children were concerned. I caught out my not so perfect Grandmother a few times. LOL Of course they always denied it didn't they. LOL
    Excellent poem from a brilliant poet.


    • Wandika gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      Thank you

      Of course, it is my wife; you see I have been married 42 years and now she is a Great Grandmother. What does that make me... Nah... can't be so!


  • Patpowers
    November 22, 2008

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    Great funny work of poetry! Just a piece to put a smile on the face. THANKS SO MUCH JIM!!

    • Wandika gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      Good deal Pat

      That is what I was trying for.

      Jim

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