When I say I love you I mean it,
When I think about you I believe it,
But somtimte love oveer powers,
And leaves me begging for more,
What more could I want,
With you Ive got all I need,
But what if you leave me,
Where might I end up,
I cant deal with this,
the fear of losing your love.....
Author notes
not sure i did this right but seeing that angle on the ground gives me seconed thoughts about love, so that is how i wrote this poem
A contest entry
- LOVE ME NOT by Whispering Wind.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 25 entries
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just beautiful and the emotions are so soft and yet strong...to fear loosing the ones we love is a love all its on...niaish so much for sharing and for entering
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Great written poem
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Thank you
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youo welcome
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Great work here
Thos who fears love are those who knows not what love is or what ones must do to keep it true
Love is something you work at everyday for those who stray were ignored along the way . Love with all your heart and make sure the one you are giving this love to is as happy as you are for often words are said but the facial expressions will tell you how they truly feel .Know the love beyond the words and keep the hearts true
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so true in many ways...love is looked upon wrongly in such ways if you know what i mean...thank you
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