I just cant believe you would do this to me,
but now you have,
its in the past,
and i must go,
this will never last.
Author notes
Short, Sweet and simple.
A contest entry
- Betrayal by Baisi.
1200 points, ended November 23, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Are you trying to find closure. A simple write is just what made this beautiful.
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Thank You
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Good work here
Often the least words spoken can be the most affective
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so true
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concise and well said . . good luck in the contest !!
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Thank you
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Very sad and something that no one
should ever have to feel in life. All
the best to you with this one, I hope
that you do well with it here!
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Thank you!!! but its not as good as much poets lol
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