My life is spinning and changing,
So fast,
My past is so far behind.
I hurry to catch up,
But gosh i am just out of time.
God cant you bring it back,
The golden memories and such.
I wish i had more luck,
For i am out of time.
Author notes
I dont think i did this right..lol
A contest entry
- please spare little time... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 6, 2008, 17 entries
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Ah.this is really very touching story of your heart with so much honesty in..love it..welldone..
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thank you
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This is something that I think we all can relate to in our lives. It seems like we're always running out of time. Even though we start early it seems that in the end we find ourselves always struggling to get things done. Good luck to you here!
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ALICE AND THE WONDERLAND! lol thats the movie with the cat and the bunny going i am late i am late for a verry important date!
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This poem eminds me of that one rabit thats alwas going "" i am late,i am late, for a verry important date! "" lol i cant rember what the shows called...
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"god cant you bring it back,
the golden memoryes and such."
So many of us wish for a chance to relive moments of time, I love this part of your poem most of all.
happy reading
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Thank you
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