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Mended

One heart.
      Mended.
            Not for resale.

A contest entry

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  • Sunkissed xo
    November 27, 2008

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    This is great. I like the fact that this poem is sorrowful and yet has a hint of humour in the line "not for resale" at the end. Good contrast! Thanks for entering the contest . x


  • Yorkshire Rose
    November 22, 2008
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    different, i luv the line not for resale