Yesterday forever non-forgetable.
Waiting awhile for him to come
back from Irag.Seven months
of no him.I sure will miss him.
What will we do?He has a
child.Off into the army.
We will miss him.Good-bye
for seven months my brother.
Author notes
I'm so sad it's happened to fast.*crys a little*
A contest entry
- What does this picture mean to you? by Soft-Rain.
800 points, ended December 17, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hello Olivia!! I love you and we all miss Daniel, too. He will be home soon enough. I know Mammy and Shane miss him bunches, but eventually we'll all be back together, one big happy family!!!
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aww
this is s touching. i sense the innocence of this write. hope everything goes well with your brother and hope you get to see him again soon
keep smiling 
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wow. i wish i could relate so i could talk to you.
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awww *hugs
im sorry to hear that your bro went to iraq. that place sucks.
i hope he will be ok!
take care and thanks for sharing
♥
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This is so sad. You have done a great job of expressing your sorrow over your brother's departure. This poem goes perfectly with the picture. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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