If we notice carefully
Every being has a shape,
Some who knows the language
They do not know about the platform
Some who knows about the platform
They do not know the language
But in our pursuits
Whether of begin chased
Or chasing,
chased by cats
chasing other rats
every shape points to the same
to glad regards and best of wishes.
A contest entry
- 20-100 words -59th Contest/Quickie/No PIF/ by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
650 points, ended December 23, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Some who knows about the platform
They do not know the language
But in our pursuits
Whether of begin chased
Or chasing,
Beautifully expressed. Well done. Best of luck -
with such a ......
.....short poem, I would have thought it worth the time and trouble to re-read at least once, and make SOME effort to correct spelling and grammatical mistakes :- IE did you mean "being" chased rather than "begin" chased? It would make much more sense!
Also, it should be "some who know about the language", or "someone who knows about ...."!
Ditto next verse.
NB "Glad" regards is an expression I have never heard or read used, in 61 years of reading and writing. "Best" or "Kind" regards, yes!
However, getting back to the bigger issue, I don't have the slightest notion of what you are on about in this "poem", nor can I understand what that tosh you've written up there has to do with a chimpanzee winking and sticking up its thumb!
Perhaps I'm missing something.
Please enlighten me!
Robin.
PS Sorry for being so blunt, but I can't help it!
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Nevertheless, it happens...
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This poem has a lovely sentiment
I really like the inspiration that you got from the prompt of this contest 
I wish you the best of luck!
Keep writing
Polly
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