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Down Memory Lane

When the wind whispers to me
A tune she borrows from the sea
When the sun smiles from above
With a caressing warmth of love
When the rain bathes me head to toe
A sinful feeling I try to outgrow
When nature's fury unleashes her whims
A joy amidst sorrow silently dims
When the trees nod their heads in a trance
I gather my memories as they prance
When the birds hum their favorite song
I join them in chorus singing along
When the road less traveled is a beaten path
And I am in the midst of an aftermath

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  • annie
    February 22
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    My soul awakens, thank you

    I have come from the dead to read with new sight the rewards of your words.

  • Revwilliamfoos
    February 19
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    My life is filled with aftermath tears flow like rivers
    love the rev papa


  • jenelda silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    Hi Shubs remember me? Jennie. I bet you're more handsome now. A lovely poem my friend. it's been a long while since we spoke, hope you are well.
    Jennie


  • StarEyes
    November 23, 2008

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    Shubs,

    It is good to read something new from you again. This is fantastic!

    Is this done? It feels unfinished to me. Not sure though.

    Great job!

    and love

    Nyetta