An angel of unspoken truth...
The child only sees beauty
And is honest to all whom she speaks.
thus
When one listens to the child
The words of love always abound.
Could you fill her shoes?
Her smile alone elicits joys
and
Even the butterflies are touched.
So Angel Child...
Keep spreading your love
And it might touch my cold heart.
As I want to be like you!
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt...Not A PIF. by Poetryintheblood.
625 points, ended November 26, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This poem says so much to me. It should say a lot to a lot of people. I wish you would stay here and keep writing like this. It's such a wonderful testimony for the Lord. If only you knew how much this says. Please stay and keep penning. Your words are beautiful and glory filled.
Hugs and love,
Sam I Am
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Absolutely beautiful. A stunning piece of work =)
-Kati -
great piece thanks a million for sharing
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Ooh..your feelings are so like mine...In a child's eyes they trust, believe...Oh such a beauty of a write! To keep us inspired by the children in our lives....and also to keep being the example they need...Such a pic, and a penning!
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Like this one
So very true really. Children can carry with them a sweet beauty and innoscense.
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Beautiful, I love the picture.
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This poem is my favorite it reminds me that you can learn alot from a child like how much they can have fun when alot of adults and parents don't have alot of also you can also learn how a child explores and maybe you can explore like them and learn along with them.. Very beauiful poem
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The child only sees beauty
And is honest to all whom she speaks.
this is a brilliant line. i love it best out of the whole poem. i thought the picture you included added greatly to the mood of the poem. but all in all a brillliant piece or work. thanks for sharing.
Laura. -
beautiful
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Life
How we seem to take the beauty and innocence of the young for granted wishing to grow up fast and then only to wish we were back with those Angels. Lovely write poet.
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a beautiful take onthe promt the purity of innicence cascades through your poem and your imagery is delightful good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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And it might touch my cold heart.
that is a beautiful line! I absolutely love this poem! Good Job!
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aww this is so cute and beautiful. i sensed the innocence in this poem. very simply penned, but with a deeper meaning
"Her smile alone elicits joys"
beautiful line! keep penning i wish i could be that little girl again.
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josie
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This is such a beautiful and touching write. And it goes so well with this picture. Well done and all the best for the contest.
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this poem is so beautiful. so touching. i really loved the entire thing! and it goes so well with that precious picture!
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