These prison walls,
The curtains, tattered, shorn,
Wave against the windows,
The walls of this prison,
Bare, hateful, forlorn,
Abused by a Traitor's Moon,
Which shines with no reprieve.
A falling of the fellow heart
which makes everything
from this view,
look okay.
I have learned to lie.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A vivid write, but lying only ends up taking you to a worse situation. Staying true to yourself, now there is the real feat...
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shorn should be torn.
This piece is very short, but gets a beautiful message across just the same. The subject is sad, and the emotion is tremendous. Beautiful imagery too! Great Work!
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This definately is painful, isolation is always painful, it's worse when it's in our heart.
good reading
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