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Sleeping Beauty (Twisted)

Tempted by an evil queen,
Pricked her finger on a needle.
Fell asleep to be awakened by a prince's kiss,
But sadly, one never came.

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Short. Simple. Twisted.
Option #3 in contest.

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  • Werewolf Avarus
    November 24, 2008

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    Short and sweet. Thank you for the entry, oh and can you please go back and read the rules
    Thank you.

    'Wolf


    • LongPatrol
      November 25, 2008
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      Whoops!

      Sorry. I just realized that. I'll go back and put in the option number. Thanks for telling me.
      -LongPatrol


  • SevenHundredSeventy
    November 22, 2008

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    That is a twisted ending! A fairy tale with a bad ending......I like it Too many sugary sweet stories are bad for your health, LOL. Good read!


  • Quabben
    November 22, 2008
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    Very Good

    Could be a long sleep then. Gave me a good laugh thank you.