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Old Lover

Missing image
Sensual reincarnation-
face no longer seen;
passionate memories
revisit my dreams.

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Eleven little words
picture by ~ Imogen

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  • Dalaney gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    I will echo all those below me...You have a knack for
    capturing so much with so few words, Russell. This
    poem has a haunting feel to it. You know I am your
    Number One fan Love, Lane xxoo


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    uniquely drawn... x


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    You are so good at the short, sharp writes.

    A story told in eleven words...pretty good going

    All the best...Sue


  • blondeoverblue
    November 22, 2008

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    Lol I'll be honest when I saw the title of this piece and that it was only 4 lines long I though 'well that relationship couldn't have been up to much!' Oh how wrong I was, should have known with your wonderful talent for weaving words that this wouldn't fail to impress.

    When relationships end inner feelings linger long after beauty's face fades.

    Kat


    • breedluv gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your kind words. They mean a lot coming from you.
      Russell

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