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Doodle





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thought's recklessness,
a distinction designed
in emergency territories,
fasting verses
in neutral colors,
lacking a blood test,
eternity trembling,
so poor.

Acceptance of concept,
'poetic scribbles',
traces listless,
doodle intrepid,
dissolves panic,
announces miracle:
importune irreplaceable.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt/Inspiration - Scribbles

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Excellent! The comfort that scribbles can bring can be quite amazing.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene