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Winter









Geese fly in unison
towards the winter skies,

leaving behind on earth,
the buds of variegated petals.


Sounds of these birds
                embellish the air
  with syllables of affection,

bidding goodbye to these skies

...till they meet next winter.















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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    What a wonderfully creative take on the prompt. Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene