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Just because

Your kisses were fierce,
Like your idea of an attack-
A hot burning branding of my skin
In secret.

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Sometimes I have random snippets in my head.

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  • joyce emmy
    March 7

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    for a random snippet, this is amazing. like the kisses the poem is about, it is fierce- it hits you so intensely, and then its done. like blitzkrieg writing


    • Cyanide Milkshake
      March 8
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      Blitzkrieg writing! Thats an amazing way to put it! Lol. You should trademark that XD Thanks for commenting x


  • tumultuous
    November 22, 2008
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    groovy

    this is is nice...full of heat. i can dig it.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    I like this. It is a good thinng it is a snippet. As hot at it is, if it were a whole poem I would have to time off in the middle to take a cold shower.

    Great job.

    Mike


  • Rajia
    November 22, 2008

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    Sexy

    Brings back alot of intense wonderful memories, and some less than pleasant ones as well. Short and powerful. Nicely done.

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