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Natures Illusion

The untouched petals of death stimulate a fragile dragonflies tired dreams,
forever crippling the ablility to produce the calming ecstacy fallen from his glittery wings.

Scattering rainbows and intense starlight fall upon diamond snowflakes that choke a young nature lovers esophagus,

and the metallic hatred and impatience is rushing the moon to hide tonight.

 

Sun and dew dropped grass is pushing their bullying boundaries,

and now those petals of death are touched as rays of sunshine drop head on his cold glittery wings. 

Author notes

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words:
hello kitty necklace
emerald citadels
lost utopian horizons
stimulate
petals
death
untouched
diamond snowflakes
esophagus
metallic
scattering rainbows
electric static
inaudible
starlight
violet
salt water
alabaster
ecstacy
willow
rhinestones
fragile

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    Good imagery and emotion
    A wonderfully written poem