What if....
he loves me not?
Desperation has prised apart
an intimacy sought,
as loneliness and fear
skirt around bare edges.
One more daring move
plucks unknown answer.
Result...completion
and renaissance,
or,
proud beauty
silently, invisibly
shedding pollen
of regret.
Author notes
Prompt - 1-picture above- credit: he_loves_me_by yabbles
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A contest entry
- WRITE! by luna-midnight.
700 points, ended December 16, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
What a great creation for the contest. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Excellent take on the prompt! Amazing words used and the feel of the poem is spectacular as well. This is a brilliant write!
Thank you for entering in the contest and good luck to you!
Love,
Alyzeh
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100th Hood-Wink!
This is an amazing take on the prompt - I really like the pollen of regret at the end - it is a beautiful image, tinged with the weary sadness of the poem ... I also love the 'daring move' - this has some great imagery in it - I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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wonderful write!
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Briliant words my friend, brilliant.
spoken from a thought held deep and brought to life from a great prompt, well done, should show up well in the contest.
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I have been contemplating this very thing of late and I think you captured the uncertainty. Perfectly written my friend. Best to you in the contest
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