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Existence

Dancing through life clouded with grief

A contest entry

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  • Sunkissed xo
    November 26, 2008

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    What a simple yet intensely emotional piece. I like the contrast between the concepts of "dancing", which implies happiness, and "grief."
    This is wonderful, full of so much meaning and spirit. Well done! Thanks so much for entering the contest

    - Sweet Blue Eyes ♥


  • Ellis gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    This sums it up in the most few words!

    • smonte19124 gold member
      December 6, 2008
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      Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • afroqban
    November 22, 2008

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    The great pretender is what I thought of as I read this. Kinda like me, acting like all is well, but inside, im a mess. Love this.


    • smonte19124 gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      I like that a lot why don't you enter if you have I'll check it out. God Bless, Jo-Ann


      • afroqban
        November 22, 2008
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        not in a writing mood, just wanna read and be inspired, let it build up, and let it ride.

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