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Living Layers

Missing image

Living layers
elude me,

exquisite
beauty
told,

soul
lost,


longing
rapture.

 

 

 

Written by; Kelle Marie Stavron

November 22, 2008

A contest entry

Isn't true that the beautiful people also suffer like the ones whom are not attractive at all, isn't it odd??

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    so beautifully penned... x


  • Talking Toni gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    WOW Kelle... this picture kind of gives insight to the chaotic mind...and your words have captured this as well...ties in to the picture very nicely Shows that though beauty exquisite as it may be is not always enough and alot of longing and loneliness still exists deep within!!!! Another Great job...you are on another roll aren't you??? Great job!!!!l~~~Toni~~~


  • daviscth silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    Sometimes I think that the beautiful people suffer most of all my friend. Boy am I lucky that I'm not one of them!!! LOL
    Your entry reminded me of all the starts we watch in the news and how unhappy they always are. Good luck in the contest.