Split down the middle,
Caught between giving up,
And standing up,
Lose another friend,
Or lose another discovery,
Fall in love,
And take off my chains,
Or fall into the pit,
With silence gagging me,
Who do I want to save?
Should I bury myself deeper,
Turn over and close my eyes again?
They say Death becomes me,
But I want someone else to love me,
So should I give in,
Let her run through another one,
Close off all possibilty,
Or take the chance,
And see what could become of me?
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A true riddle, with the confusing parts well-described. Such difficult choices -- the ending is powerful, "or take the chance/and see what could become of me?" The flow is great, and your line breaks are perfect. I really like that you first make us connect with your feelings, and then you make us think!
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