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Tranquility




Zephyr's virginity,
mystical serenity,
breaths sensuality.

























































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  • Sunkissed xo
    November 22, 2008

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    I like the structure of this, very solid and block-like. I also like the fact that you have made the ending word of each line have a similar ending, e.g. "sensuality, serenity", it really gives the poem a nice feel. This is a very mystical and rich write. Well done. Thanks so much for entering the contest
    - Sweet Blye Eyes <3