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Rediscovered

Millions of words
On the tip of my tongue
Wanted to be spoken
Needing to be heard
A lifetime of love
Not Yet discovered
A touch long yearned for
But never felt
Unknown yet so familiar
Unafraid of showing hearts
Complete faith
Absolute trust
In you
My childhood love

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  • Kahalita
    December 8, 2008

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    This really makes you think. Reminds me of all the thing which are never said that you wished you did when you think back. nicely written!


  • Sgt B
    November 22, 2008
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    Love

    That's what came to mind for me as I read this. Sometime we forget what true love feels like & every once in a while someone comes along & *bam* you remember. Sometimes it's great, and sometimes we get hurt. But love is what moves the world.

    Great job my friend!

    Really enjoyed this read.
    ~Ron~


  • dustookie2
    November 22, 2008
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    Ah good to see you back and showing us some thoughts from 'the brain' The title 'Rediscovered' implies so much and has me thinking but as i read your lines I feel there is wisdom of longing perhaps some regret of not speaking out ..... reflections of younger days of innocence. Nicely penned hun and just so good to see you grace us with your work


  • Lady Australis silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    intesting poem beautifuly written

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