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Celebrate Life

In life there is much to celebrate
Never allow these times to slip by
Rejoice in life's successes for they create
Everlasting memories that none can deny
Give the gift of being yourself and all will relate
Each day praise and honour another chance given to try.

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Not very good lol, but I have done one to celebrate your
500th Congratulations!

Harrisham Rhyme
Harrisham Rhyme, created by the female poet, Harrisham Minhas, belonging to the State of Punjab
in India, of a six-line rhyming stanza. In this form, the last alphabet of the first word of each line is the
first alphabet of the first word of next line.

There is no restriction on the starting alphabet of the first line.

Rhyming scheme : ababab.


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  • penman gold member
    December 31, 2008
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    Excellent

    What a great use of the form. So very well done. Congratulations on the honorable mention.


  • dustytiger
    November 26, 2008

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    it's simple but i really like this a lot, it's to the point and just very powerful, best of luck in the contest


  • Desire gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    Beautiful~

    Yay You did the Form
    Bravo~ I told her I would have to give her form a whirl Love how You penned this along with the message weaved within Your words~

    One cannot help but smile
    Woot!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Pete Greenslade
    November 23, 2008
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    nothing negative here,,wonderful thoughs good luck x


  • SimplyNoodle
    November 22, 2008
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    WONDERFULL!!!!!!!!! lol


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    This is gorgeous, you can turn your hand to anything my dear and this form is no exception. Brilliant. Best to you in the contest

  • Bob Fox silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    Gaylene

    First I never realized you had some many trophies. Lol But I can understand for your product is excellent. And yes as this fine wrire says. Be kind and gentle to yourself. For if not how can one possbly love?


  • Harrisham Minhas
    November 22, 2008
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    This is a beautiful, subtle, hopeful and positive poem.
    It is very good and I thank you so much for writing this to celebrate with me.
    Definitely, there are numerous blessings in life and we can find joys in simple, everyday things. We should always celebrate them.

    Wonderful words of wisdom have been expressed in this poem.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas

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