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Bound


 

heart yearns, yet enslaved
bound by previous chains, those
obligations do claim her

       

 

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  • Bruce silver member
    May 23
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    I loved this! So true!


  • Dalaney gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    Thank you so much
    for entering my contest.
    Love, Lane


  • Keith Drew gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Strange this poems coincides with the the one you just commented of mine.
    Our hearts are tangled it seems?


  • Confusedboy
    November 22, 2008

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    I DO KNOW

    Life offer no easy choices, decisions what is best. I know life is too short to miss out, acting as what IF!
    Though we may mourn our previous choices, we cannot turn time back or have another chance, as it were.
    I like your title: Bound. Many think life ties, in reality its our minds. Thank you for sharing. This is heartfelt.