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Closing My Eyes To The Summer Leaves

A picture of you comes back and my imagination is tossed,
into the special things that you do in the frame that it composed,
your tender hands and gentle legs walking across the trees,
the wind raises my my emotions to the feeling that it frees,
as when the times were all about you and falling diamonds all over,
the light was of the  best hue and it was something that had no cover,
it was all open and deep truth that i always love you,
it is all forever true and i cant live a moment without you,
every world that evolves is all about your essence,
its all so special when i think about your presence,
when we kissed as the leaves fell from the fascinating plants,
seeing you smile always is what every piece of me wants,
the swift wind makes me think of your beautiful curly hair,
every day is each day climbing a golden stair,
and i get closer to your gentle soul that shows the deepest care.

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  • Sandygram
    December 1, 2008

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    Your words are so lovely and do touch the heart of this romantic. You have described how loving someone should be. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck. Your poem was a pleasure to read this morning. Take care, Sandy


  • Jesann gold member
    November 28, 2008
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    This is very beautiful.
    A soft and gentle flow of words..I love it.
    Well done.