Water falling from on high
raindrops from an autumn sky
busy people rushing by
look upwards with a weathered sigh.
Clouds break as the sun is nigh
morning songbirds start to fly
storm clouds wave a last goodbye
to Mother Nature’s lullaby.
Author notes
Poetic Form: Monorhyme - Prompt - Water
A contest entry
- Poetic Form: Monorhyme - Prompt - Water by Little Eagle.
600 points, ended December 28, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your entry
Yes raining can be like a lullaby. Nice imagery and good flow in this. You followed the prompt well and the end rhymes were well developed. This was a fairly simple form and you were able to rhyme well without feeling forced.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy -
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Beautiful and brilliant Lovely flow. A wonderfully tight piece.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Exellent monorhyme! Well done! Pam
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What a pretty little verse this is! I love it's gentle imagery and flow.
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Now this monorhyme can not be as easy as it first appears, one must pick a word with many rhymes and what a brilliant job you have done of it. A wonderful flow and rhythm throughout this piece and what a gorgeous picture it draws. Best to you in the contest
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