rainbow trout
over cobalt horizons
leap
Author notes
haiku
A contest entry
- Quality Not Quantity :] by Sunkissed xo.
900 points, ended November 27, 2008, 34 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Wild Animal Poems by Paloszoo.
900 points, ended January 2, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"Over cobalt horizons....." I love that line. Stunning. Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you show your work here!
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Congratulations on your award! A wonderful choice of words filling the readers mind with images so real, one could be standing enjoying the view flyrod in hand. Great job..OutofMind
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Beautiful and tranquil. I love this. Congratulations on the Silver Joseph!
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"cobalt horizons"
Sounds amazing...extremely serene. Love it.
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Very clever indeed. Well done to you and good luck in the contest
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This is great! I love the imagery that you
managed to pack into these six words.
Well done!
Jeremy0826 -
This is beautiful. Such vivid imagery in such a few words. Incredible.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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I love how 'leap' is the stand alone word... makes it all the more visual in my mind. The image of rainbows crossing cobalt horizons in the form of fish... beautiful. Best of luck in the contest, with your way with words, I'm sure you stand a good chance =)
Ashley A. Wolfe
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Way to go Joe! Nice job on this one...enjoyed it!
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Thank you for your lovely comments.
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wonderful!
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How divine! The imagery here is truly lovely, you've managed to create an entire world of wonder in so few words, I feel as though I could lose myself in it!
At first read I took this piece quite literally, but now I can see that it could have many meanings and interpretations, which is wonderful. Well done on a fantastic write! You've really grasped the whole concept of a 6 word story so nicely. Thanks for entering the contest
- Sweet Blue Eyes ♥
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