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Still Darkness...

tears rain dawn sha'll not shatter

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6 words

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  • StickyNote5
    November 22, 2008
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    wow. the small amout of words gives a big meaning. but you should really change the back round.


  • Sunkissed xo
    November 22, 2008
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    Very mystical and stormy write here. I like the fact that it can be interpreted in so many ways and can fit so many different ideas. In itself, however, it is a most thought-provoking and lovely piece. Well done! Thanks for entering the contest
    - Sweet Blue Eyes ♥