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Heartbroken

I know where love lies buried.

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  • Joseph Hollis
    November 23, 2008

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    Interesting take on the prompt. I'm reminded of a work by Samuel Taylor Coleridge where he talks of "Love's Burial Place." The poet says "Love lies buried where 'twas born..." Well done. Thanks for sharing.


  • Pearl-1
    November 23, 2008
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    Brilliant Bad Bill
    June


  • Sunshine Always
    November 22, 2008

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    Bill, you have excelled yourself here in these wonderful few words...No need for luck here me thinks...mal


  • Sunkissed xo
    November 22, 2008
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    This is very powerful and moving. I like the fact that this take on love is so new and fresh, as opposed to the traditional, clichéd interpretations of it. Truly beautiful, a romantic masterpiece indeed. Thanks so much for entering the contest, well done on a fabulous write!

    - Sweet Blue Eyes ♥

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    November 22, 2008
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  • Keith
    November 22, 2008
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    A rose blooms on the grave.


  • DolphinLass silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    wow this says so much in so few words well done and good luck


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    It was I who planted the tree at love's head.

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