Silence deafens
intense volume assassinates
a mind deactivated
I am lost.
A contest entry
- In eleven words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 22, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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truly compelling... x
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A very good interpretation of the picture.
Good luck with this one.
Love Suz
xxxxx

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Very Effective


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A short poem, but I can see how it realates to the picture. Good job






