Unclearly defined
you deepen our seam
with the most
unfathomable things.
A contest entry
- In eleven words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 22, 2008, 19 entries
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creatively drawn... x
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this sounds like a dark take...well done dear!
All the best!
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Being a midnight write hahahaha I am happy if it says anything at all lol and thanks bucketts
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Welcome hoards
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This is a really short poem, and yet it is very good. The rhymn for the poem is good even though it is only 4 lines. Good write
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Thank you for your comments on it, I so appreciate
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