Monkey love by maralisa at All poetry

Who love's ya babe,
I do love's ya babe,
wink wink,
let's go for a ride,
in my car ,
to watch the evening
stars,
wink wink,
I 'll take ya to a movie,
it will be groovy ,
in the morning,
lets watch the sun dawning,
wink wink ,

I love's ya babe.

Author notes

image found on google artist unknown please credit
20-100 words please credit sensual angel for the background

A contest entry

20-100 words -59th Contest/Quickie/No PIF/ by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel. 650 points, ended December 23, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Make this THE largest Contest EVER on AP [enter, enter, enter!] by Symphony. 18000 points, ended April 28, 1011 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

hope

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Symphony
February 21

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LOL, that was errr - random!

Love the background by the way, how adorable cute is that;

Not entirely sure about the poem itself, it didn't really do anything for me to be honest

But - thanks for entering
spiritualangel
December 23, 2008
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Looking like a lyric. A beautiful effort. Best of luck.
BluesMan
December 17, 2008
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Funny write I wonder what the offspring of that encounter would look like A degenerate chimp I love it
montez
December 15, 2008
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Sorry...
...but it's just a fair effort.
The "Kojak" repetition I find a little irritating ; not funny, nor original.
Sorry, this is not intended to offend, just my honest opinion : having read some of the critiques below, I think they must ge referring to another piece!
R.
chilali
December 10, 2008

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Hahaha! Omg! I love this one. A great take on the picture. Good luck in the contest.

Much love
Ylova
Reptile Lady
November 24, 2008

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cool one
Love Chimps and your words were great, brought a morning smile to my face reminded me of Kojack lol
Best wishes in the contest my friend
Julie
Desire
November 24, 2008

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OMG~
This is Precious and the picture had me rolling
Gorgeous border~ touches the Heart deep
You are so darn Precious
Woot!
How can one not smile after reading this
Keep that quill dancing~
Thank You for sharing Your Humor and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
Sweet Impatience
November 23, 2008

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I love your poem its cute.. thanks for the link.. bg looks great. you did an excellent job with this prompt. I saw the prompt and my muse went huh?..

good luck
kat
LovetimesLove
November 23, 2008

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Monkey goes Ape Man
Eye catching is the lil teddy with kleenex, slippers and robe. Out going is the write...Hunk of a
Venugopal
November 22, 2008
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nice rhyming write from my sweet child
Midnite wolf
November 22, 2008
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aww, wow, this is so sweet and so imaginitive. love it hun, good luck in the contest.
luna-midnight
November 22, 2008

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awwww, hehe....this is like soooo flipping cute im going bananas *wink wink* hahaha
good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥
penman
November 22, 2008
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
Dragonheart1
November 22, 2008

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very cute and imaginative write...Let's gofor a raide to watch the evenng stars....very romantic too. God luck in teh contest...