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impression (H.M)

Missing image


Expunging my disliked reflection
he painted his impression
on my heart



Author notes

11 words

picture by ~ Imogen

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Though provoking and beautiful in sadness...truly lovely well worth the trophy...


    mystic


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    creatively drawn... x


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Sad but beautifully penned, oh talented one!
    All the best with this
    Gaylene


  • abuyi
    November 22, 2008
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    PROFOUND
    best of luck


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 22, 2008

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    Oooohh

    Profound and intense!

    Best of Luck
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to You
    ~Manda

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