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Portray

Every clip of life,
assorted hue,
bolder strokes,

soul chiselling time.

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    Deeply compelling... x

  • carole21
    November 22, 2008
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    good luck in the contest !!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    This is great 11 words of wonder good luck to you in her contest best wishes always be well


  • abuyi
    November 22, 2008

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    this so amazing.. that was a hard picture to write on that also in 11 words. this so profound and your title portray goes so beautifully with this..
    best of luck my dear friend


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 22, 2008

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    Wow, you made this thing swing, I may have a stab at it, you made it seem so smooth, good luck in the contest lol

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