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Unforgiving




                                  Shattered reality of

                                  Devastating dreams,
                     
                                    Broken promises.

                                      Out of touch,

                                        Unforgiving.

                                 

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picture by Imogen

A contest entry

How does this make you feel and can you relate to this

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    so deeply compelling... x


  • Maxboy gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    Very good neighbor, you have brought some wonderful words to life in the picture.

    Best wishes in the contest