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HeartBreak...

More
Than a loss
    a 
Missing piece
  to
Your Soul...

    A
Wound to be
Reopened.

Author notes

-write a short poem 10-15 words about pain, heartbreak, addiction. cliches without the cliche. i will critisize these harshly.

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  • Brilliant Blonde22
    November 24, 2008
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    aint that the truth!


  • She burns
    November 22, 2008

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    In such short words, you have said a lot, emotional and heart-braking at the same time, I feel it deep inside, and it hurts...


  • crimsondew
    November 22, 2008
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    Done extremely well in brevity..lots of feelings and emotions related out...
    All the best dear!