Today there's no reason to open the door
I don't know why you're here, and it's all been said before
I'm staring at this canvas, so brittle and black
Trying to find its vision but you're knocking at my back
If I could only get this finished, if i could just see this through
The brush to the canvas is all I ever knew
Singers sing and dancers dance while prophets go insane.
Preachers preach while deadmen die and the prisoner has his cage
But, what's a painter who can't paint
Whose burning light is growing faint
Whose only claim to attaining Zen
Is a spot where something should've been
Today there's no reason in anything you'll say
It's all just the music of the broken record at play
I'm staring at this canvas, so lifeless and grey
Trying to give it vision, but the picture always fades
I just need to see this finished, I just need to get this through
The brush to the canvas is all I ever do
Singers sing and dancers dance while children find the grave
Preachers preach and liars lie... slaves are ever slaves
But, what's a writer who can't write
Whose every day fades into night
Whose only thoughts were never penned
On the spot where something should've been
A contest entry
- The Beauty of Being Unfinished by Heart Sutra.
1100 points, ended November 30, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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This poem doesn't seem to fit with the contest theme. I am not sure I am getting how it ties in. Having said that, I think you have a good first stanza, after that it feels too much like I am being preached at or pigeon holed into a bitter world, which has its place in poetry; however, it is important to give the reader some room to move, breathe or think of an alternative. I guess I am trying to say that poetry gives something as much as it takes, and when I read this poem I don't feel that reciprocal relationship between reader and writer.

